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Monday, April 23, 2012

What happened in the holidays

On sunday 22/4/12 my Aunty took me to a quad bike race that I was in. To start the engine you have to hold the right brake  and then press the starting button which was green. It was so much fun.

During the afternoon we had  salmon, potatoes and cauliflower with cheese for lunch. My nana made it. “Yum” I said.

My nana let me open my birthday present early. It was so cool. I got given a part of a Lego city.








2 comments:

  1. Wow Eric! Sounds like a great birthday with your family. I really liked that your paragraphs are about one idea and that you have used speech in your writing.

    I think next time you write you could try and explain in more detail what you experienced.

    Good start to the term Eric.

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    1. Thanks Mr Marks That is so nice of you

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