Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Monday, April 14, 2014

Term 1 reflection 2014

Term 1 Reflection 2014

My highlight of this term is getting new friends like Neo, James, Kyal and Zion.

I have made progress in making movies and adding details in my drawings.

I know this because my drawings are looking more realistic then it was last year. This makes my movies look better.

I still need to work harder to improve my handwriting at home. I also need to get better at writing.

I know this because my mom can not understand my handwriting. My writing needs to make more sense.

I am most proud of my efforts to write faster and better.

My 3 main goals for Term 2 will be...
Main Goal 1. My goal is to sleep more and have a proper breakfast each day.
Main Goal 2. My goal is to concentrate on the work that I am told to do.

Main Goal 3. My goal is to stay calm and listen to the teacher.

Friday, April 11, 2014

Shark attack

Once upon a time there lived a man named Bob. He was so rich that he could have anything he wanted. He lived in a castle next to a very clean lake. He lived with his twins Steven and Connor. His wife had been dead for 2 years because of the birth of the twins.

One day the family went out fishing in their luxury boat. As soon as they put their line out, the fish were already biting. They pulled their lines up and put more bait on. Out of the blue, Stevens hand started to bleed. The boat started to shake and fish were swimming away. Suddenly a shark jumped over the boats and just missed Connor.

The twins were shaking with fear. Bob went inside the boat and grabbed a machete saying “I knew it was a good idea to bring this.” Bob came out of the boat and waited for the next shark. Another shark came and Bob cut it in half. Then two more sharks come and Bob cuts them both in half.

“Okay, this trip is officially over” said Bob walking to the steering wheel. So they motored over back to their house. As soon as they got to their house they had something to eat. For their dinner they had the shark that was left on the boat.

Monday, April 7, 2014

Six Sentence Story

Once upon a time there lived a man named Bob. He lived in a bush. He has a very creepy talent that he can bend his finger back and make it touch his wrist. He is very poor and has only one pair of clothing. Bob felt very sad and lonely. Bob was not happy being poor and lonely so he got a job and he became very rich and when he was rich he gave poor people one thousand dollars each.