There was 9 students came to school. Meagan was in our class for ten weeks. She helped me and a few other boys
I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Mr Wiseman.
Friday, June 3, 2011
Wednesday, June 1, 2011
Adding Detail to Sentences
Our class learnt how to add detail to phrases. we started adding detail to the beginning of the phrase "invented the spaceship". We then had to add more detail to the end of that sentence.
Here are the sentences I wrote.
The alien invented the spaceship.
The teacher invented the spaceship.
Homer Simpson invented the spaceship.
Homer Simpson invented the spaceship.
The alien invented the spaceship with a man, when he was tired.
The teacher invented the spaceship with his class, at play time.
Homer Simpson invented the spaceship with Bart, out in their backyard.
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